SCREAMING AND YELLING. you absolute genius... you've taken it in such a different direction to what i was expecting and i absolutely LOVE that. your writing is so beautiful, with the extended metaphor of death - every reference just punched me in the gut, ESPECIALLY calling minghao the crypt-keeper of seoul. and all that stuff about aging and never quite growing after that love was so powerful too... and all in just 400 words! insane! you're really incredible to be able to write something so impactful so concisely. thank you thank you thank you <3